January 2006 Weddings
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First Challenge

I'm taking these challenges from Josip Novakovich's Writing Fiction Step By Step.  It's a pretty good book:

Write two or three pages of a dinner conversation.  Intersperse the descriptions of the activities around the table and the body language of the diners with the dialogue.  You might choose two characters from a piece of fiction you're currently writing, or even characters from different stories.

Purpose: To use dinnertime as a conversation starter.  Dinner is a good reflection on how we live, what we do, what we are up to; the context of dinner can help your dialogue immensely.  Here you already have a resovoir of body language, manners and images.

Check: Do you have interesting dialogue? No matter what your purpose is in having a dialogue, it should be interesting, engaging.  Many people, after all, during dinner, want to be entertaining - perhaps they tell jokes or boat or confide or interrogate or quarrel.

TTC since 07/11 Me: 32 AO PCOS/DH: 32 Lowish count/motility IUI#1-3 = BFN (Clomid, Clomid-->Femara, Injects) IVF#1 ER on 9/24 19 ER/19 M/9 F w/ICSI Transferred a 5AA and a 5BB on 9/29 Beta 10/9 = 139 Beta 10/11 = 287
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Re: First Challenge

  • And since the entries will be long, I suggest we start a separate thread for each one - making critique, comments, discussion easier.  Just label your thread "My Challenge #1" when you post it.
    TTC since 07/11 Me: 32 AO PCOS/DH: 32 Lowish count/motility IUI#1-3 = BFN (Clomid, Clomid-->Femara, Injects) IVF#1 ER on 9/24 19 ER/19 M/9 F w/ICSI Transferred a 5AA and a 5BB on 9/29 Beta 10/9 = 139 Beta 10/11 = 287
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