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I finally finished Allegiant (sp)

Ok, I finally finished this book. MAN was this a boring slog.

I went in knowing Tris was going to die because this had been spoiled for me, and, honestly, Tris almost sacrificed herself for stupid shit like 8 times in Insurgent, so it wasn't a surprise for me at all that that's how V-Roth decided to take the story. I think Tris would sacrifice herself for her brother she hates because she has a history of doing stupid shit that makes absolutely no sense.

And, honestly, I wasn't all that sad about it. Tris got on my nerves big time in Insurgent and continued to bug in this book. I didn't understand where she was coming from and what made her do the things she did most of the time. I didn't like her. I was only sad about her death because Four was sad.

I agree with people who said that Four didn't seem like himself in this book. I know why she had to do the 2 POVs, but I would have rather not been in his POV at all if we just discover he's boring and whiny. Seeing him through Tris's eyes was way better.

My problem with this book, and with Insurgent, now that I think about it, is that it just wasn't very well written. I loved Divergent, and I still do. But she wrote that book with all the time in the world and then wrote these 2 under crazy deadlines with enormous pressure and I just don't think she was able to pull it off. Too many needless characters, too many similar uprisings/revolts. She's obviously a good writer, but I don't know if she wasn't edited enough or if people just let her do what she wanted or what, but both Insurgent and this one were boring and confusing for most of the time and that's not really how a book should be. And I think it was Lauren who said that it's not confusion that you trust will all work out, it's confusion like WTF, did I miss something?

I'm disappointed in this series. Divergent was awesome, but the other 2 books didn't hold up IMO.

Question: Why did they keep mentioning Matthew's supervisor and then pointing out how the supervisor was never there? Did I miss something here? Did we ever discover the identity of the supervisor? WTF was the point of this?
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  • EliStarEliStar member
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    That pretty much sums it up. 

    I was wildly disappointed. Book 2 was not as good as Book 1 for me but it wasn't THIS BAD. I thought exactly what you did - that she just did not have enough time to polish this one. Tris' character arc sucked. She didn't learn anything. She didn't change one bit in books 2 or 3. 

    I was mildly entertained in the beginning but it quickly got boring, confusing, and after the whole "revelation" about the factions, I knew this sucker was a turd. 

    I wasn't sad that Tris was dead, I was angry because it seemed so fucking stupid. And because Four was sad, and even though he wasn't himself in his book it still made me mad that he was upset because Tris did something so fucking stupid YET AGAIN. 

    Also - I don't get her final words to him. I don't get them at all. She made this BFD in the beginning about wanting to live and not sacrificing herself again. And then she goes an does it again because she's moron. 

    I'm still mad. I'm mad because I LOVED Divergent and this series had so much potential. It feels like a wasted opportunity. 

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  • Oh, my other question...

    If it turns out that Matthew is sympathetic to the plight of the GD, why does he IMMEDIATELY go out of his way to prove that Four is GD and not actually Divergent, thus making him feel like an outsider?
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  • EliStar said:
    That pretty much sums it up. 

    I was wildly disappointed. Book 2 was not as good as Book 1 for me but it wasn't THIS BAD. I thought exactly what you did - that she just did not have enough time to polish this one. Tris' character arc sucked. She didn't learn anything. She didn't change one bit in books 2 or 3. 

    I was mildly entertained in the beginning but it quickly got boring, confusing, and after the whole "revelation" about the factions, I knew this sucker was a turd. 

    I wasn't sad that Tris was dead, I was angry because it seemed so fucking stupid. And because Four was sad, and even though he wasn't himself in his book it still made me mad that he was upset because Tris did something so fucking stupid YET AGAIN. 

    Also - I don't get her final words to him. I don't get them at all. She made this BFD in the beginning about wanting to live and not sacrificing herself again. And then she goes an does it again because she's moron. 

    I'm still mad. I'm mad because I LOVED Divergent and this series had so much potential. It feels like a wasted opportunity. 
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  • EliStarEliStar member
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    Oh, my other question...

    If it turns out that Matthew is sympathetic to the plight of the GD, why does he IMMEDIATELY go out of his way to prove that Four is GD and not actually Divergent, thus making him feel like an outsider?
    I couldn't nail Matthew's character down at all. Is he a geeky nerd? Is he a bleeding heart rebel? 

    And one more thing. GD and GD are the stupidest terms I've ever heard ever. I kept thinking of Gestational Diabetes. 

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  • No, I don't believe we ever did find out who Matthew's supervisor was. Tris suspects he doesn't have one at some point.

    I agree with you about Matthew conducting the test on Four, and how it maybe doesn't line up with his later behavior and sympathies. However, Tris comments on how he is very Erudite, even though he lives in the airport not the city. So I guess VR was linking every Erudites' craving for knowledge over compassion or sympathy to Matthew.

    I was more surprised that Tris would lead Tobias to the test knowing that he was a little emotion, a little unstable at that point in time. What was she thinking? What good could come from Tobias having his genes examined?  But she never expresses any real remorse for taking him to the test or it being her idea.  I guess that was her Erudite coming through too.
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  • My problem with this book, and with Insurgent, now that I think about it, is that it just wasn't very well written. I loved Divergent, and I still do. But she wrote that book with all the time in the world and then wrote these 2 under crazy deadlines with enormous pressure and I just don't think she was able to pull it off. Too many needless characters, too many similar uprisings/revolts. She's obviously a good writer, but I don't know if she wasn't edited enough or if people just let her do what she wanted or what, but both Insurgent and this one were boring and confusing for most of the time and that's not really how a book should be. And I think it was Lauren who said that it's not confusion that you trust will all work out, it's confusion like WTF, did I miss something?
    WORD to everything @Young_Love said, but especially this.  Her time and possibly creative constraints clearly showed in Insurgent and Allegiant.  So many plot holes, so many obvious plot devices, and way too many extraneous characters.
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  • InLovewSB said:
    No, I don't believe we ever did find out who Matthew's supervisor was. Tris suspects he doesn't have one at some point.

    I agree with you about Matthew conducting the test on Four, and how it maybe doesn't line up with his later behavior and sympathies. However, Tris comments on how he is very Erudite, even though he lives in the airport not the city. So I guess VR was linking every Erudites' craving for knowledge over compassion or sympathy to Matthew.

    I was more surprised that Tris would lead Tobias to the test knowing that he was a little emotion, a little unstable at that point in time. What was she thinking? What good could come from Tobias having his genes examined?  But she never expresses any real remorse for taking him to the test or it being her idea.  I guess that was her Erudite coming through too.
    SO WHY MENTION IT? Why bring it up at all? WTF was the point of the speculation if it leads to nothing?
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  • This review on GR pretty much covers it: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/504738977
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  • Oh, and was it ever explained why Tris was immune to all the serums? Were her genes just THAT SPECIAL? How was she immune to the death serum and no one else was? Not even the other GPs? 
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  • EliStar said:
    Oh, my other question...

    If it turns out that Matthew is sympathetic to the plight of the GD, why does he IMMEDIATELY go out of his way to prove that Four is GD and not actually Divergent, thus making him feel like an outsider?
    I couldn't nail Matthew's character down at all. Is he a geeky nerd? Is he a bleeding heart rebel? 

    And one more thing. GD and GD are the stupidest terms I've ever heard ever. I kept thinking of Gestational Diabetes. 
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  • My problem with this book, and with Insurgent, now that I think about it, is that it just wasn't very well written. I loved Divergent, and I still do. But she wrote that book with all the time in the world and then wrote these 2 under crazy deadlines with enormous pressure and I just don't think she was able to pull it off. Too many needless characters, too many similar uprisings/revolts. She's obviously a good writer, but I don't know if she wasn't edited enough or if people just let her do what she wanted or what, but both Insurgent and this one were boring and confusing for most of the time and that's not really how a book should be. And I think it was Lauren who said that it's not confusion that you trust will all work out, it's confusion like WTF, did I miss something?


    I completely agree with this.  There have been many authors that I felt the same way with.  They have agents, editors, publishers, whoever breathing down their neck and details/plots/good stuff gets missed because THEY HAVE TO GET A BOOK OUT.  They got to ride (quickly) on the success of the first book so get out those subsequent books (I've seen this happen even to books that aren't in a series).  It's all about the $$$$.
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  • Oh, and was it ever explained why Tris was immune to all the serums? Were her genes just THAT SPECIAL? How was she immune to the death serum and no one else was? Not even the other GPs? 
    She was just that special.  

    Maybe she's a Millennial. LOL.
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  • This review on GR pretty much covers it: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/504738977
    The first comment on that review made me LOL.

    loooolll yeah, the Tris dying for Caleb thing....like just imagine how lame it would be if Harry died for Peter Pettigrew- oh, but wait, he would never, because ass holes like that have it coming, sorry not sorry. 

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  • I finished this last night and I'm so disappointed. First of all, it was just boring. And the dual POV made no sense (until the ending). Often, I had to stop and remind myself who was narrating, because the voices sounded so similar. Four's personality completely disappeared. UGH.

    I hated the whole genetically damaged/ experiment plot. I felt like the author just decided to go that route with this last book and never intended it from the beginning (because this last book felt like such a departure from the first). And it was soooo cheesy. I kept waiting for the revelation that Tris was immune to all serums because the true reason for the experiments was actually NOT to repair people's DNA, but to create superhumans and that Tris was the first to be found and therefore the long-awaited savior of this broken world!

    I know a lot of people think it's ridiculous to have happy ever after endings for YA books, but what I am starting to hate is the whole "teenagers stumble upon a plot and then save the world in just a few months" idea. I try to just go with it at first, but often, by the third book I just don't care anymore.
  • Tobias was such a whiney b the whole time.  Ugh.  I missed Four from Divergent.  That guy was worth reading about.
  • I read these spoilers because I'm not reading the last two books any time soon if ever. This makes me SO GLAD I didn't wait in an hour long line to meet Veronica Roth and have her sign my copies of Divergent and Insurgent. 
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  • Reading these and agreeing with everything that was said makes me want to take back my 3 stars.  Ugh.
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  • "I didn't want to leave him," is a weird, reverse, fucked up version of "I'll never let go, Jack."
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  • Agree x infinity. I'm still pissed about this book. PISSED.

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  • Ok, so I just finished and am going back through all of these spoiler posts.

    The funny thing is, I have almost all the same problems as everyone else - except Tris dying. I guess I saw it as her finally learning when it was "right' to take the risk. And then irony that the time that she does it right, she gets killed.  It really didn't bother me or feel dumb at all.  Plus, let's be honest - Caleb would have fucked that up big time, and then everyone would be screwed.

    The two points of view drove me INSANE.  I could not keep straight whoTF was talking, ever. 

    I am a total science/genetics geek, not in that I know much about it, but I find it fascinating.  But the attempted explanations in this book made my head hurt, so I had to just stop trying to figure it out.

    I felt SO often that I missed something.  Something about her writing just made me feel like there are a bunch of little plot points I must have missed.  But no, I just... didn't.  There is no foreshadowing or hints that further explanation is to come - OR, if there is, NO FURTHER EXPLANATION COMES.

    And a little thing, but I hated it - Tris getting super, royally pissed at Four for not just blindly agreeing with her about Nita?  That was some serious bullshit.  And Four just meekly accepts that she's right afterwards.  Just no.

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  • Oh and also - I really didn't find it boring.  Maybe 50 pages or so there when they first get to the compound, but I thought it moved at a pretty good pace and kept me turning pages.

    I actually totally ignored both my children tonight to finish it up.

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  • 84Lauren said:

    The funny thing is, I have almost all the same problems as everyone else - except Tris dying. I guess I saw it as her finally learning when it was "right' to take the risk. And then irony that the time that she does it right, she gets killed.  It really didn't bother me or feel dumb at all.  Plus, let's be honest - Caleb would have fucked that up big time, and then everyone would be screwed.


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  • 84Lauren said:
    Ok, so I just finished and am going back through all of these spoiler posts.

    The funny thing is, I have almost all the same problems as everyone else - except Tris dying. I guess I saw it as her finally learning when it was "right' to take the risk. And then irony that the time that she does it right, she gets killed.  It really didn't bother me or feel dumb at all.  Plus, let's be honest - Caleb would have fucked that up big time, and then everyone would be screwed.

    The two points of view drove me INSANE.  I could not keep straight whoTF was talking, ever. 

    I am a total science/genetics geek, not in that I know much about it, but I find it fascinating.  But the attempted explanations in this book made my head hurt, so I had to just stop trying to figure it out.

    I felt SO often that I missed something.  Something about her writing just made me feel like there are a bunch of little plot points I must have missed.  But no, I just... didn't.  There is no foreshadowing or hints that further explanation is to come - OR, if there is, NO FURTHER EXPLANATION COMES.

    And a little thing, but I hated it - Tris getting super, royally pissed at Four for not just blindly agreeing with her about Nita?  That was some serious bullshit.  And Four just meekly accepts that she's right afterwards.  Just no.
    I just finished Allegiant last night and am late to the discussion, but I agree with your review. Also, I think we could have just gotten Four's POV at the end and that would have been enough for me.
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  • I hated that Four's character changed so much in this book. I hated how whiny he was. He went from a super-hot alpha guy to this meek guy whose girlfriend has to be unquestionably right all the time. 

    Tris is still this girl too busy trying to prove to everyone that she's a badass. Except that she's no longer a Dauntless initiate, and nobody cares how tough she is, and only a wannabe badass has to verify it every five seconds.

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  • I agree with Lauren.

    And also.. Peter. WTF? What has he learned? That he can just take the serum and forget???
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