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Critique my invite wording

Front of invite with a photo:

DH is turning the BIG 3-0...

I'm Planning a Party and He Doesn't Know

Back of invite:

Please join me for a Surprise Birthday Party
in honor of
DH

Date, Time and Time he will arrive

Name of Restaurant and Address

Please RSVP....blah blah blah

Shhh...

Re: Critique my invite wording

  • I would be scared about them confusing the time he is arriving with the time they should arrive.  I would maybe bump up the time a few minutes and mabe at the bottom say something like, if you can't make the surprise time, please hold off on arriving until xxx time.  I know it sounds rude but you don't want them walking up the same time he is, in case you are running late.
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  • I guess I should have typed it exactly how it is going to be on the invite:

    6:30pm

    (DH will arrive at 7pm)

    Does this look ok?

  • Like Mel said you don't want them all arriving when YH is getting there so I think as long as you make it clear you'll be alright. So the way you have it typed out should be fine.
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