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Job description...

IT Administrative Assistant

Responsibilities include: purchasing and tracking internal hardware and software; maintaining licensing compliance; Internet research; coordinating company contact with HP/Microsoft; planning and managing projects to meet deadlines; assisting Help Desk Technicians in internal support request management. Other responsibilities include general administrative duties as assigned.

Qualified candidates have a strong working knowledge of MS Office, good written and verbal communication skills, strong organizational skills and ability to multi-task in a fast paced environment with a team of technical experts. Good research and analytical skills are a must. Knowledge of MS Access and PC hardware/software a plus. Candidates must be able to lift a maximum of 50 pounds without assistance.

Cover letter...

Dear Sir or Madam:

Last Sunday, I read your ad for an IT Administrative Assistant in the Temple Daily Telegram.  I believe this position is the perfect opportunity for me to utilize current skills and also gain experience and first-hand knowledge of a company specializing in software.  I've had the opportunity to work in a variety of positions and have a wide range of professional abilities.  I have worked with project managers to maintain budgeting goals and completed work with strict deadlines.  I have helped teach coworkers new processes on company software.  I have faced complicated problems and found a solution through research and critical thinking.

I hold a Bachelor of Science in Finance, and my immediate goal is to be accepted to Texas A&M University Central Texas and study for a Master of Science in Information Systems.  My experience has been with accounting departments, but in every position I have become the teammate most interested in the software design.  I have spent hours exploring different systems, simply because I enjoy it.

After reviewing Company at website, I am excited to become a part of the organization.  I would love to become involved with the company?s culture activities.  I have participated in several charity functions and fundraisers through previous employers.  I raised $150 for the MDA Lock-Up and more than $500 for the Make-A-Wish Walk For Wishes, two organizations that are very close to my heart.

I believe the IT Administrative Assistant position is exactly what I am seeking. For a full-time position, I would accept a salary of $37,500.  I look forward to discussing my potential employment with PDI. 

Sincerely,

Alexis