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How would you word this?

When DH and I moved into our current apartment at the end of June, I explicitly asked the woman at the leasing office for a special if we signed an extended lease.  She stated that since they were so near capacity, they weren't offering any specials.

Fast forward to last week - a banner goes up at the leasing office announcing specials for 2 and 3 bedroom rentals.

Yesterday, I went to the leasing office to ask about the specials.  I offered to sign a new lease, for 13 months from now, or for 13 months past our current lease (putting us into 2013) if we could have the special.  The woman there (leasing manager) said she would speak to the property manager and let me know.  Today I got an email telling me no.

The special would save us $600 over the course of the lease.  And DH and I are into the idea of staying here for a while - we really like this place. As such, I don't plan to give up so easily.  I want to write her back, being a little more insistent, possibly talking to a higher-up if  I can (But without sounding snooty).  How should I word such an email.

EDITED: To fix my enormous typographical errors...eesh.

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Re: How would you word this?

  • I'm too tired to have amazing suggestions right now, but good for you!  Keep fighting for a special.
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  • I'm not very good at this kind of thing, but I definitely agree you should put the pressure on.  There is no reason they shouldn't offer you, a lessee in good standing, the same offer they are giving to any old Joe off the street.  You'd think in today's society with word-of-mouth going fast as lightening through social media that landlords would make wiser decisions, especially when it wouldn't be a losing situation for them.
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  • I am also not very good at the wording but I would try to get the property managers contact info. I had issues with what they were trying to charge us with move out damages and apparently what the office manager was telling the property manager wasn't the same thing I was trying to get across. Just try to get across how strongly you feel about it and keep the pressure on.
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  • Do I get a special? Do I need to go all lawyer on your azzzz? Do I need to cutabitch?

    One of those would probably get the point across. Stick out tongue

  • imageCory's Wife:

    Do I get a special? Do I need to go all lawyer on your azzzz? Do I need to cutabitch?

    One of those would probably get the point across. Stick out tongue

    Hahahahaha!

     

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  • This type of thing annoys me - companies are willing to give discounts to new customers (or in this case, tenants), but don't offer the same for long time customers (tenants). Cable companies are notorious for this. I understand wanting to attract new business, but geez, treat your current customers well too!

    Anyway, I would probably say something like:

    Dear so and so,

    Thank you for your email, but I am disappointed with your response. DH and I have been tenants in your complex since June, and very good tenants at that. I find it very unfair that we are, for whatever reason, not being offered the same benefits as new potential renters. Particularly since we asked about rent specials when we signed our lease, but were told that none were available at that time. We are willing to sign an extended lease with your complex in order to take advantage of the current rent specials; something that would benefit both parties. 

    I understand that maybe you do not have the authority to work with us on this. If that is the case, would you kindly send me the contact information of someone who does have the authority? Maybe your supervisor, or the property manager?

     Thank you for your time

    XOXO,

    Dehko

     

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  • imagekatiedom:

    This type of thing annoys me - companies are willing to give discounts to new customers (or in this case, tenants), but don't offer the same for long time customers (tenants). Cable companies are notorious for this. I understand wanting to attract new business, but geez, treat your current customers well too!

    Anyway, I would probably say something like:

    Dear so and so,

    Thank you for your email, but I am disappointed with your response. DH and I have been tenants in your complex since June, and very good tenants at that. I find it very unfair that we are, for whatever reason, not being offered the same benefits as new potential renters. Particularly since we asked about rent specials when we signed our lease, but were told that none were available at that time. We are willing to sign an extended lease with your complex in order to take advantage of the current rent specials; something that would benefit both parties. 

    I understand that maybe you do not have the authority to work with us on this. If that is the case, would you kindly send me the contact information of someone who does have the authority? Maybe your supervisor, or the property manager?

     Thank you for your time

    XOXO,

    Dehko

     

    Love love love this and I'm about to use it.  Thanks!

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  • imagedehko:

    Love love love this and I'm about to use it.  Thanks!

    Make sure you use the XOXO at the end, hahahahaha Stick out tongue

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