My sister is already married, but had a very small wedding (she and her husband and two friends) a year ago, which most of our family doesn't know about. They're having their "real" wedding in May, and we're trying to figure out invitation wording. How does this look? Anyone have any suggestions? It's a very informal wedding, and I'm afraid I'm making it sound too formal.
Together with their families,
Jennifer Lee XX
&
Mathias XX
would be delighted for you to attend
the celebration of their marriage
Saturday, the nineteenth of May
two thousand and twelve
at 6 o'clock in the evening
Delray Beach, Florida
Reception to follow
Lady Delray Yacht
Delray Beach, Florida
ETA: The ceremony is on the public beach, and she'll be putting a map in the invitation envelope for where exactly people should go since there's not a specific address.



Re: Wedding Invitation Wording Critique
Holy cow, we're going to have a little sister!!