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Wedding Invitation Wording Critique

My sister is already married, but had a very small wedding (she and her husband and two friends) a year ago, which most of our family doesn't know about.  They're having their "real" wedding in May, and we're trying to figure out invitation wording.  How does this look?  Anyone have any suggestions?  It's a very informal wedding, and I'm afraid I'm making it sound too formal.

Together with their families,

Jennifer Lee XX

Mathias XX

would be delighted for you to attend 

the celebration of their marriage

Saturday, the nineteenth of May

two thousand and twelve

at 6 o'clock in the evening

Delray Beach, Florida

Reception to follow

Lady Delray Yacht

Delray Beach, Florida

 

ETA: The ceremony is on the public beach, and she'll be putting a map in the invitation envelope for where exactly people should go since there's not a specific address.




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