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Timing that's really off. poss. BD spoiler

Can someone explain this one?

I'm doing my re-write of BD & the second time they do it.

Bella goes to sleep at night, wakes up that night with the sexy dream.

They do it and she falls asleep again. Then she wakes up again in the morning & Edward tells her she has slept for 12 hours.

They get up and watch a DVD after that & the cleaning crew arrive so she could not have been confused about it being morning.

How does that work?

Re: Timing that's really off. poss. BD spoiler

  • I don't know, but I just wanted to say that I am really looking forward to reading more! You did a great job Smile
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  • Hmm. I thought it was midday when she woke up, she ate and then wanted to get busy again, but the cleaning crew showed up to the island (or was about to the house?) and Edward tells her no, she picks out a movie, and they watch while the crew cleans.

    Is that what you're asking about? ?

  • no dude you are right?!  it's totally off.  then after the movie or whatever she has "lunch".  seriously that bugged me the first time i read it.
  • Yup thats the part ... It says she woke up in the morning & it does not correct it to say she woke mid day as if she just did not know it was already mid day. After the cleaning crew left she ate lunch.

    I guess Bella could have just really been off on her timing that whole day... I'm trying to figure if I want to omit the "you slept 12 hours" part or have Edward think something about her eating breakfast after noon now to show it was really mid day.

  • I'll look it up later and see if I can make more sense of it.
  • OR you could just skip the eating and get to the good stuff - j/k ; )
  • LOL I've already written two sex scenes... my re-write is gonna be all smut if I dont fade to black a few times here and there.
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