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Surprise Party Invitation Wording

Could you girls please look this over and let me know if it sounds stupid, is confusing or if I'm missing something?  Thanks :)

 

Kathy is 50 and Fabulous!

We're having a party

And you're invited to show

But don't tell Bill

Because he doesn't know

So if you can make it

Here's a word to the wise

Make sure to come early

'Cause it's a surprise.

Please join us to celebrate 'my mom's' birthday

Date

Please arrive between 5 and 5:30pm

Place

RSVP by date

RSVP info

Re: Surprise Party Invitation Wording

  • That's AWESOME!  Did you come up with the rhyme yourself?  I'm never that clever.  Any reason why "my mom's" is in quotations?

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  • Oh, and Bill is my dad...we're not telling him because he'll tell her.  So we're basically surprising both of them and don't want anyone to say anything to either of them.
  • Very cute and original!  I like it!  Is there a space between "Cause it's a surprise" and Please join us...?  Reason is...I got in the rythm with the poem and kept going with it...then it didn't rhyme anymore!  Then again it could be the Cranberry Vodka I am drinking!
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  • cute.:)

    What place did you finally settle on?

  • I should have just put my mom's name in...but for some reason I didn't when I typed out the post.

    There's going to be a space between the two parts of the invitation.  I found the poem online.  I was trying to make up my own, but it was taking forever.

     

    We were initially going to have it at Mirabella, but the owner was really rude and almost made my grandmom cry on the phone.  Jerk!

    We're having it at Barone's in Moorestown.  We ate there Thursday and had a great dinner and great service.  They've been really nice and accomodating so far and they just renovated their banquet room.

  • Good choice with Barone's. We ate their recently. A while back we attended a RD dinner there and everything was great. :)
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