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Dannyand Allison
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Invitation help
I need help with invitation wording because I don't want people to talk about me on a message board 
Here's the background info: My aunt wants to throw my mom a surprise birthday party this month except my mom's birthday isn't until November. She also wants it to be a luau party. I'm having a difficult time with the wording. I need something that goes after "her birthday isn't until November" that ties together the luau part. Here is what I have so far:
The sun is hot,
the water's cool.
Won't you join us
as we party in the pool?
Her birthday isn?t until November,
We're having a luau party!
We want you to come.
mom is turning 60!
Surprising her will be fun!
No gifts necessary.
Regrets only
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Re: Invitation help
But we wanted you to remember?
That's the only word I can really think of that even approximately rhymes with November.
That could work. Now I need votes. Which one?
A
The sun is hot,
the water's cool.
Won't you join us
as we party in the pool?
Her birthday isn?t until November,
and we wanted you to remember,
we're having a luau party!
We want you to come.
mom is turning 60!
Surprising her will be fun!
or B
The sun is hot,the water's cool.
Won't you join us
as we party in the pool?
We wanted you to remember, Her birthday isn?t until November,
so we're having a luau party
and we want you to come.
mom is turning 60!
Surprising her will be fun!
I vote B.
This changes the meter and rhyme scheme, but how about something along the lines of this:
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The sun is hot,
the water's cool.
Won't you join us
for a party in the pool?
Mom?s turning 60 in November,
But for a birthday to remember
We?re planning an early luau surprise!
So say you can come
For this birthday fun
As we celebrate ?til sunrise! [or] with all her favorite guys!
(The last line still needs work.)