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Want to polish this invite wording?

I know this is early, but the invitations are on sale til Wednesday! :) (And, well, I woke up at 4 am this morning freaking out about school, so the two Christmas parties I'm planning are truly my happy places right now.)

This was just a super hasty, throw-some-words down draft for the girls-only tree trimming party with my classmates.  (It'll be during finals, hence the intro.)  The intro and cookies & cocoa part both feel awkward to me, the latter esp because I also planned to serve wine & cheese.

Put down your notes,

step out of the library,

let's take a break with some holiday fun!

 

Come over for a

Tree Trimming Party (larger, fancy font)

with cookies and cocoa

 

Saturday, December 11th

7:00 PM

name, address, RSVP info


Printed on this invitation.  The invitation only depicts girls, but I thought maybe something about it being just girls should be in the wording?

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Re: Want to polish this invite wording?

  • Finals are coming, and with it some stress,

    But we'll need a break to keep our brains at their best!

    Join me for relaxing with some wine and some cheese,

    And we'll top it all off with trimming a tree!

    Date, rsvp info, etc

     

    This may not be your style at all, but I'm teaching poetry right now and this is all I could think of! 

     

  • imagewweaver0:

    Finals are coming, and with it some stress,

    But we'll need a break to keep our brains at their best!

    Join me for relaxing with some wine and some cheese,

    And we'll top it all off with trimming a tree!

    Date, rsvp info, etc

     

    This may not be your style at all, but I'm teaching poetry right now and this is all I could think of! 

     

    That's cute...I like it!  Also, I don't think you need to specify that it's girls only...the picture of all of the girls at the bottom clearly gets that across.  Or you could make a little note of it at the bottom that it's ladies only.  But when they rsvp, I would assume they'll be letting you know whether they're intending on bringing anyone and then you could sway them otherwise!

    How fun!

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