Does this invitation wording sound right?

TarHeels&Rebels

I've been hesitating to order these because I'm not certain about the good cheer part.  A toast of?  A toast to?  A toast of good cheer to the season?

Please drop in for

a toast of

Good Cheer (fancy cursive)

Friday, December 17th

7-11 pm

name & address

RSVP

I kinda like it the way it is and it looks nice on the on-screen preview, but I wanted to make sure it sounded right to someone else.  If you really dislike the wording overall, please tell me.

 

 

wweaver0

I LOVE the invite!  So cute.

I'm hesitant on the wording, though, just because it's not really clear what you're inviting people to.  Is it just cocktails?  A dinner?  Tree trimming?

Unless it's a gathering you have every year that people will know what to expect, I would make the wording a little more specific, at least so people know whether or not to eat before hand!

GatorWedsNole

wweaver0:

I LOVE the invite!  So cute.

I'm hesitant on the wording, though, just because it's not really clear what you're inviting people to.  Is it just cocktails?  A dinner?  Tree trimming?

Unless it's a gathering you have every year that people will know what to expect, I would make the wording a little more specific, at least so people know whether or not to eat before hand!

Ditto to everything.  Super cute invite, not 100% clear, but if people know what to expect b/c it's not the first time or b/c they've been chatting with you about it, then you're all good.

wejustwant2:)

Ditto pp. : )

JESS04169

The invites are lovely. Here is a little help; you always toast "to" so don't use a toast "of"

HisCB

"Please drop in for " (sounds like an open house, like it wont matter what time people come) also because it says 7-11 rather than just 7:00 for the starting time.

 

otherwise ditto pps.