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Help me make this less cheesy...
So, for my cousin's wedding next week, DH and I are getting them a gift certificate good for 2 Boston (where they're headed on their honeymoon) Duck Tour tickets. I've ordered the gift card (If we ordered them actual tickets, we would've had to pick a time and we want to leave that up to them and for it to be a surprise) and 2 of the duck lip quackers. I'm going to put both in a cutely wrapped box with a rubber duck on top to go with the theme. I'm working on a poem to put in the box, but need help making it less cheesy.
Heres' what I have so far:
We love Boston.
We hope you will too.
When you get there,
There's only one thing you should do.
Take a ride in the big steel bird.
This gift card will get you 2 tickets we've heard.
Don't forget your all-important quackers.
Because we hear no quack zones are for slackers.
Re: Help me make this less cheesy...
Um, I'd just write:
"Congratulations-- enjoy your honeymoon!"
I like it as it...cheesy makes me smile...I would say "there's somethinig I think you'll like to do"
cause the one thing they should do is bang
The bride always likes cheesy too, that's why I thought a little cheesy was okay. I just didn't know if this was to cheesy.
Also, your right about the "something I think you'll like to do". After all, it is their honeymoon. lol
Your cheese is fine...totally gouda.
I think you've struck the right balance between cute and corny.