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Dear Community,
Our tech team has launched updates to The Nest today. As a result of these updates, members of the Nest Community will need to change their password in order to continue participating in the community. In addition, The Nest community member's avatars will be replaced with generic default avatars. If you wish to revert to your original avatar, you will need to re-upload it via The Nest.
If you have questions about this, please email help@theknot.com.
Thank you.
Note: This only affects The Nest's community members and will not affect members on The Bump or The Knot.
Re: Thanks!
Can I critique even though I'm not an educator?
IMO this needs to be shorter. You don't want to regurgitate your entire resume in a CL, and you want to use as many keywords as possible. I'd change it to something along the lines of:
January 3, 2012
Mary H***
*** *** Schools
1111 street
City, State 00000
(000) 000-0000
Dear Ms H:
I am writing to express my interest in the Elementary Teacher position with *** *** Schools. The *** *** Schools mission encompasses my aspirations as a teacher. As as recent graduate at UofT of the University of Teaching where I completed a Master of Arts in Teaching degree with an Elementary Teaching credential, I was able to apply a sociocultural perspective to my teaching practice. Creating challenging learning opportunities that are culturally relevant were essential to this program. It is my goal to develop a learning community that is safe, respectful and supportive. An example of how this was applied in practice was a geography concept instilled through dance for a group of sixth grade students as part of my Guided Practice program. This lesson was a success in part due to the supportive and respectful classroom climate from the outset.
My resume is enclosed for your consideration. I would welcome the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications why I?d like to be a part of the Chief Leschi School?s team. I may be reached at 000-000-0000 or [e-mail]. I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
kinmir30
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