Put words in my mouth, please!

imsnazzy

I recently posted about this job I wanted and asked whether or not I should be checking in while they "figure out a hiring budget." Around that time I had just contacted them so I wanted to wait a bit, but the general consensus was that I should check in every 1-2 weeks and see how it was going, especially since they told me outright they'd be making me an offer. The last I heard from the decision maker was, "We're really impressed with you. Hang in there please." That was a month ago.

I was planning on e-mailing the HR person this time. I have no clue what to say, though! "Hello [name]! Just wanted to check in and see how that budget was coming along!" ?? LOL. I am totally inexperienced when it comes to the interviewing/negotiating game. Help?

lovelaughlive

Dear HR person,

I hope this email finds you well. I'm inquiring today about the status of my application for the pole dancing position. I have re-attached for your convenience my resume, do let me know if a decision has already been made. I look forward to hearing you.

Kindest regards,

Sparkly tits.

Mrs.JulesH-S

Dear so & so,

I am contacting you to inform you that I am still very much interested in working at such & such place.  Please let me know if there has been any update to the interviewing/hiring process that would affect me in moving forward.

Something like that.

imsnazzy

lovelaughlive:

Dear HR person,

I hope this email finds you well. I'm inquiring today about the status of my application for the pole dancing position. I have re-attached for your convenience my resume, do let me know if a decision has already been made. I look forward to hearing you.

Kindest regards,

Sparkly tits.

LOL. 

Thanks to you both, this helps!