I haven?t done an invite since our wedding. Is this laid out properly? Should the ?R? in Requests be capitalized? And in the second paragraph should the ?On? and ?At? be capitalized? I do have an email for the RSVP. Thanks!
The Commanding Officer of Marine Wing Support Squadron 473 Detachment Bravo Requests the pleasure of your company at the Retirement Ceremony of XXX On Sunday the sixteenth day of August at fifteen hundred hours at the Navy Reserve Center, Building 1803 on Doolittle Avenue Naval Air Station Fort Worth Joint Reserve Base Fort Worth, Texas 76217 Attire: Military participants: Desert Utilities Civilian: Appropriate Attire Reception immediately following RSVP by August 9th, 2009
Re: Critique my invite please.
I don't think they need to be capitalized - but I'm not 100% sure
I agree the PP - will everyone know what appropriate attire means?
I've never attended a military function, so I didn't know that. In that case, looks good!
sorry - can't help you
I started thinking about men in uniforms and my heart skipped a beat....I can't think straight
Love it!
I made a few changes, taking out some of the little words that aren't necessary.
The Commanding Officer of
Marine Wing Support Squadron 473
Detachment Bravo
Requests the pleasure of your company
at the Retirement Ceremony of
XXX
Sunday, the sixteenth of August
at fifteen hundred hours
Navy Reserve Center, Building 1803
Doolittle Avenue
Naval Air Station Fort Worth
Joint Reserve Base
Fort Worth, Texas 76217
Attire:
Military participants: Desert Utilities
Civilian: Appropriate Attire
Reception immediately following
RSVP by August 9th, 2009