How does this wording sound?
"Come to my party and celebrate a bit,
see my first cake I'll be wearing it.
Brynn's First Birthday Party
Sunday July 3rd
4:00PM
G___ House (address on back)
Please RSVP to Paige By June 25th
Phone or email"
The back says
"Our address
I80 is under construction an alternate route may be best
No Gifts Please - Your presence is present enough"
Then we have an insert that says
"Please feel free to stay after the birthday festivites for a Bonfire and Fireworks."
Does everything sound ok? Can you see anything that I should change?
TIA ladies! I have to get these ordered tonight so I can get them out the day after she turns 11 months!
HOW IS MY BABY ALMOST 1???????
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Yup! Semi colon or even a dash (- that's just because I type that way)....
Mr. and Mrs. est. September 6, 2008 Expecting Baby #1 October 1, 2013
Thanks ladies!
The actual invite did have the comma. I just forgot it here of course!
I actually like the presence is present enough part, I think it's cute and I like the wordplay. But that's just my opinion.
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